Pick Up

1. Keskarel and The Videographer after escaping from being seen by K's husband: K reveals to The Videographer that she's "relieved he's alive," and so on.
2. New scene: K and or The Videographer run into another neighbor who has heard the "domestic disturbance" across the way and wants to know whether anyone else has.
3. New scene: K asks Nidal whether anyone has been looking for her - this because at the moment it's a mystery (including to me & AD Chris) why Parviz was in the neighborhood.
4. Speaking of which: why is Parviz in K's neighborhood?
5. In L.A.: in addition to the Hamlet + Ophelia scene, we need a pass-by on the street scene, a sneak up to the window scene or two, etc. 
6. keep it simple - documentary, straightforward - but next round: use shadows, reflections, transparencies (environmental phenomena that we rely on to be there, that gives our surroundings dimension, but that we tend only to notice while we're thinking about them. but i think about those phenomena all the time!)

sylvia