Thursday, November 17, 2011

A message from sylviatoyindustries

Gmail keskarel navapeac <keskarel@gmail.com>

the script doctoring

keskarel navapeac <keskarel@gmail.com> Thu, Nov 17, 2011 at 2:14 PM
To: Christopher Robinson, Michael Lewis
hey. i think my doing the initial dramaturgy, i.e. is the script true to the throughline etc., is okay. but, for instance, i think the end is weak and needs further thought. i don't think i should be involved in that. i have my own opinion, but other than the initial cuts, that's the most major input i should have on the script at this point. and Chris, you should run any of those cuts you disagree with by Mike, who is a really good dramaturg.

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sylvia

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The Keskarel the Movie production team

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