Text to AD Chris from Sylvia -
Epiphanies: 1. All 3 including the husband the videographer and K have to go to the beach for the beach scene. 2. The videographer has to resolve the neighbors' noise issue because she's the one with the hangup.
Email to Sylvia from AD Chris -
I was confused about the text I received earlier today, I think we should just stick to the things we talked about, I guess I just don't understand it. I want to write the final scene tomorrow and I think you should write the scene selection piece and I can take a look at it because you probably have a better idea of what you want from the story. After I finish the last part we should have a story conference and figure out what all else we need to do.
Text to AD Chris from Sylvia -
i understand. we will talk. please watch the whole new version of the storyboard. or we can watch it together. you will see it's already almost complete. the domestic disturbance subplot must be resolved, as does the "triangle" of friendship, namely k, V and mikael
keskarel's money situation should be dealt with in the first scene - i suggest shooting pickup of k in the laundromatic right before she runs out - when it's logical she'd start thinking about her next step - revealing a money belt under her shirt, full of euros & dollars. done and done.
so, chris and i talked, and after a lively discussion of the new status quo in the story's development - i.e., K is running down the street away from both her husband and her friend V, who don't yet know each other - clearly, the stakes have been raised. K now knows that she can do anything she wants, her husband wants her back and V isn't going to give up. so, nobody is going to stop running, and they will wind up having to deal with each other at this new plot point. most likely, the story will reach resolution on the subway instead of the beach, although if AD Chris can get everyone breaking bread together, which is what he wants to see happen ... well, ... - sylvia
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