hey, Diana said she accidentally deleted this, so i'm resending.
i spent 7 or 8 hours yesterday cleaning up and resequencing the storyboard. after seeing the flow, i think we will hold off on the second laundromat scene (below). even with trimming, the movie is 63 minutes. a first film like this will just not be crisp if there is anything redundant. crispness helps balance unknownness.
you all should know that the old kitchen scene has been chopped up and woven into the laundromat scene as flashbacks. i think once i clean up the transitions the pace of the scene will be at a nice clip. however what that means is that scene is still happening after what we shoot tomorrow night, and we will have to have some scenework to show the couple temporarily making up before the big gundown. the storyboard is rendering, now and it will take all day. but once it's up tonight, it would be a good idea for you all to watch the beginning of the movie. i will send the link tonight, or you can watch it on the blog or Facebook.
also, Mike and i will reshoot the Videographer with her headphones on with no sculpture in the picture. that is a continuity fix that's simple.
---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Christopher Robinson
Date: Sun, Jul 3, 2011 at 1:16 PM
Subject: Here are three more scenes
To: keskarel navapeac <keskarel@gmail.com>
Hi Sylvia, I had a lot of dreams last night, woke up at six thirty had
brunch with my wife and got to work. So this would be a combination of
the many things we have discussed for our project. I hope you enjoy
the beats.
I figure we need two more scenes after these three. For the next scene
I would like a beat where V convinces K to go back to her husband, K
says something like, “I want to go to the beach first, it is the place
where I think best, the place that gives me strength.” V agrees then
the two get lost and do not end up making it back to Nima’s.
In the final scene V can say something about a surprise she has for K,
K say’s, “I love surprises,” and the two can take the bus back towards
Nima’s. Along the way V convinces K to go back home. I would like to
improvise the meeting between Nima and K; I would like to show K
waiting by the steps for him. He comes in sees K invites her in, they
talk, things happen and our movie ends.
I would like the grocery store scene to be improvised, but we should
meet up and together we can make the prompts. We can also think of
more scenes if needed. ...
sylvia
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